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Composure by ~a-to-z:icona-to-z:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed




the look of your eyes
are as wildflowers tamed
while your butterfly kisses
gather like moths to my flame

the comfort of your company
like a climax caving in
in the fortress of this rubble
we'll find ourselves again

the subtlety of your breath
like the rhythm of the waves
though we be in more danger
thru your words i'll be saved

the honesty in your voice
summons memories from afar
what once were only wishes
have finally become ours
©2005-2010 ~a-to-z
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Yet another piece of poetry to rot your brain. And since it's so sweet, maybe even your teeth. Beware!

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~seiv15 Sep 9, 2005, 7:14:50 AM
nice

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~inutero Sep 9, 2005, 8:38:10 AM
i love this poem!!!!! and now it's in my favorites, reminds me so much of that one special person in my heart right now, thank you for that. I was so mad right now, and this made me feel like he's here with me, i need to see him now, THANK YOU *HUG*!!!!

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"Shut up, you eedeeot!"-The Ren & Stimpy Show
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~a-to-z Sep 9, 2005, 8:41:20 AM
thank you, and you're welcome! :)
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~the-poofer Sep 9, 2005, 11:58:19 AM
dude thats awesome espically the pic..i like it alot..keep it up .....bro....:nod:

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Well im leaving
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~inutero Sep 9, 2005, 5:43:22 PM
you should consider going on to publishing or something that interesting of a value

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"Shut up, you eedeeot!"-The Ren & Stimpy Show
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~a-to-z Sep 9, 2005, 5:59:07 PM
ah thank you! i actually pulled that off the internet and screwed around with it a little bit, made it look cooler. thanks, lil sis!
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~a-to-z Sep 9, 2005, 6:11:33 PM
i've always been kind of scared that someone would plagarize my work... and plus, i usually just write for myself and the people directly around me... i might look into it one day when i'm feeling a little bold. thanks for that!
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~inutero Sep 9, 2005, 6:29:04 PM
yeah, it would suck if someone did that, you're welcome!

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"Shut up, you eedeeot!"-The Ren & Stimpy Show
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